一、江苏高考的英语作文真题回放内容
请阔读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
In recent years Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast online votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the"Most Beautiful Teacher"and the" Cutest Baby".
Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the "Best Police Officer" competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers'daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the" Future Singer"competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;
2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。(满分25分)
二、高考英语作文试题解读
这是一则读写模式的命题,即要求考生先读所给信息和材料,了解其大致意思,先用30个词准确表达全文概要,然后再用一篇作文阐述自己的观点。678招生考试网认为文章的主要话题是当前十分流行网络投票和微信点赞,要求考生针对这一社会热点阐述自己的观点。之所以成为话题是由于观点不同,意见各异。本篇中,有些人认为投票是考虑到亲情友情,对他们投票是情感因素之一,表达对他们支持和肯定的行为;有些人认为不应给他们投票,是基于公平公正原则,即给表现并不出色的亲友投票违反这一原则;有的人认为频繁的被拉来投票已经影响了自己的正常生活……
考生碰到这类命题通常出现以下问题,即不知从何下手,该如何布局写作,或脑海里已有大致框架,但组织材料出现问题。678招生考试信息网认为具体表现在:①面对信息不知道如何组织材料;②审题不仔细,没准确把握命题者目的,可能出现文不对题情况;③论述时缺乏启承转折,说服力不高,表达效果欠佳④受汉语思维禁锢,不自觉地用了中文思维模式。
话题作文一般根据写作要求大致可以下图结构来布局:
根据导图可将作文设为三段:第一段对所给材料进行简要概述,并巧妙引入话题,属点题部分(Beginning);第二段阐述这一现象给人们带来的双面影响,即积极的和消极的,本部分属正文(Body),篇幅较长;第三段综合对比两方面影响,然后给出自己的观点,且观点要积极正面,符合主流价值观,这部分属结尾段( The ending)。678招生信息网认为考生也可根据需求将第二段正文(Beginning)拆分为两段,一段将正面影响,一段讲消极影响。阐述时应加入恰当的连接词,避免过渡生硬,使文章可读性强。为提高文章档次和增加亮点,应适时加入高级词汇,运用多种表达法,包括高级复合句。
三、高考英语作文写作要点
(1)简要阐述文章内容,并巧妙引入话题。
(2)详细阐述网络投票的积极影响,或正面价值,2-3条为宜。
(3)论述网络投票的消极影响或弊端,2-3条为宜。
(4)结合两面影响,给出自己的观点和见解,亦或提出应对策略。
四、高考英语作文可用素材
1)词汇
become popular with、involve...in...、competition、natural resource、technology、convenient、feedback、 fairness、be beneficial to、put sb.into a dilemma、vote for、in one s view、regardless of、work out、depend on、take advantage of
(2)句式
Generally speaking,it is widely believed there are two major positive aspects of... However,as a popular saying goes,every coin has... To be honest,voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because.In my opinion, online voting is an inseparable part of. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of... We should reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case,we will definitely make...
五、高考英语作文注意事项
(1)文章结构要合理,既有概要统领,也有分项详细解释。
(2)用词要准确,阐述要细致,前后句要符合逻辑。
(3)阐述自己观点时,要态度明确,切忌跑题。
(4)注意行文连贯,过渡自然,可加入适当的过渡词或短语。
(5)注意卷面干净整洁,确保颜值分。
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