江苏成考英语作文范文:网络投票的看法

       一、江苏成考的真题回放内容
　　
　　请阔读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
　　
　　In recent years Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast online votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the"Most Beautiful Teacher"and the" Cutest Baby".
　　
　　Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the "Best Police Officer" competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers'daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
　　
　　Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the" Future Singer"competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
　　
　　二、范文
　　
　　Online voting becomes more and more popular.Many people get involved in online voting in many competitions, some of which are helpful to people, while some of which make people confused about whether to vote or not.
　　
　　In my view, online voting is a new product of the development of modern science and technology.It's convenient for people to participate in some public events,wherever and whenever they take place.Beside,on-line voting can save lots of natural resources,especially paper. What's more,voting on the Internet can get instant feedback and the result of the competition.
　　
　　However,as a popular saying goes,"Ever coin has two sides."and online voting is no exception. It has its negative effects. For one thing, people feel confused, not because they don't like voting, but because they don't know how to make a decision a about voting which depends on competitive fairness.For another,it's unfair to some degree, because sometimes people don't vote for the best competitor. So, online voting should be completed further. If so, things will turn for the better. In short, I am in favor of online voting.
　　
　　三、解析:
　　
　　①作文开门见山,直接引入话题语言简洁高效,读起来朗朗上口。
　　
　　2)it's convenient for people to...经典句型运用,ⅱ是形式主语,加上不定式结构。678招生考试网认为作者表达方式多样,内容丰富,表达准确。
　　
　　③what's more作为过渡短语运用恰当,突出文章层次,条理更清晰。
　　
　　④not because...but because运用恰当,完美解释了投票选择时的犹豫和困惑,文章表达效果佳。
　　
　　because引导了一个原因状语从句,高级句式为文章添彩,提升文章档次。适当的解释使文章论述更合理,富有逻辑性。
　　
　　⑥经典的总结语in short简洁直接,表达明了,完美收官。
　　
　　四、点评
　　
　　本文语言简洁大方,表达效果很棒!在阐述正反两方面影响时,678招生考试信息网认为作者给出的理由非常充分,解释也很到位,使内容极富逻辑,清晰地论述了网络投彯的优点和弊端。高级句式如which引导的定语从句、wherever和whenever所引导的让步状语从句、 because引导的原因状语从句等,运用娴熟,表达准确,为文章增色不少。动名词、动词不定时和非谓语动词的运用则凸显作者的写作能力和语言运用能力。678招生信息网认为过渡词或短语 besides、especially、what's more、in short等运用使文章结构紧凑,过渡自然,行文连贯,英文的质感油然而生。
　　
　　五、译文
　　
　　在线投票越来越受欢迎。很多人参与了很多比赛的网上投票,其中有些是对人有益的,有些则让人对是否投票感到困惑。
　　
　　在我看来,网上投票是现代科学技术发展的新产物。无论何时何地,人们都可以方便地参加一些公共活动。此外,网上投票可以节省大量的自然资源,特别是纸张。另外,在网上投票可以得到即时反馈和竞争的结果。
　　
　　然而,常言道,“硬币都有正反两面”,网上投票也不例外,也有其负面影响。一方面,人们感到困惑,并非他们不喜欢投票,而是因为他们不知道如何决定投票,这涉及到竞争的公平性。另一方面,在某种程度上它并不公平,因为有时人们并不会投票给表现最好的竞争者。因此,网上投票应该进一步完善,如果是这样的话,情况会好转的。简言之,我赞成网上投票。