成考英语作文:以《班规》谈想法的写作思路

       一、真题回放内容
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　　阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
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　　On the first day of her work, Sally found that a class full of problems was waiting for her; six teachers had quit before her. When she walked into the classroom,it was chaos: two boys were fighting in the far corner, yet the rest of the class seemed not to notice them; some girls were chatting and some were running about; paper,food packages and other garbage were littered around. Just when she was about to speak, a student rushed in and pushed her aside! He was twenty minutes late!
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　　Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: Rule 1: We are family! All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3... In the following weeks, sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.
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　　Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students.Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class.At the graduation ceremony, Just as she expected. she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.
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　　[写作内容]
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　　1.用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
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　　2.用约120个词就班规谈谈你的想法,内容包括:
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　　(1)你们班最突出的问题是什么?
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　　(2)针对该间题你会设计一条什么班规?
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　　(3)你认为班规会带来什么影响?
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　　[写作要求]
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　　1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
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　　2.作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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　　二、试题解读
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　　认真审题,努力读取命题者的真实意图,想要考查考生的哪些能力。阅读材料可知,678招生考试信息网认为这应该是一篇夹叙夹议的写作。即先简要讲述一件事,然后针对这件事所表现的现象进行深入分析。678招生信息网认为构思时,考生应充分发挥想象力,运用扩展思维,运用熟悉的、掌握的句式将隐藏的主题表达出来。678招生考试网认为叙述时需要过去式(根据题意可知,这则故事已发生),议论时需用一般现在时。避免直译各个有要点,而应恰当运用过渡语和转换词,使文章行文连贯。更主要的,文章所反映的主旨要符合主流价值观,表现积极的人生观,传递正能量。
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　　三、写作信息要点
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　　(1)用30个词简要讲述材料内容。
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　　(2)阐述自己班级存在的问题。并针对部分问题进行分析。
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　　(3)针对上述问题提出自己的建议,或解决方案。
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　　(4)若采取所议方案,班级会发生什么变化。
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　　四、可用素材
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　　(1)词汇：
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　　be confronted、faced with、emphasize、work out、regulate ones conduct、behavior、considerate、first and foremost、well-mannered、additionally、put up with、efficient。
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　　(2)句式：
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　　Faced with the misbehavior of. Sally emphasized the idea of "we are family"and... One obvious problem with our class is... In my view, this rule will definitely exert a profound and far-reaching effect on... Last but not least,studying in a group will share our experiences in solving problems. I would make it a rule that...Worst of all,they show no respect to...
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　　五、注意事项
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　　(1)注意30词讲述短故事时,故事虽短也要符合逻辑。
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　　(2)注意分析产生问题原因时要符合逻辑。
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　　(3)提出的建议要合理,符合实际,而且要积极正面,传递正能量。
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　　(4)运用高级句式和高级词汇,提升文章档次。
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　　(5)注意拼写正确,书写规范,字迹工整,保证印象分。